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雅思写作 | 犯罪类话题怎么写

作者: 2023-09-01 16:07 来源:嘉兴编辑
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  写作当中的犯罪类属于比较冷门的话题,每次考到的时候,学生在词汇和内容上往往就很容易出现空白。


  本篇文章我们一起来探讨一下大作文当中的犯罪类经常会用到的单词和论据方向。


  词汇是犯罪类话题最明显的一个问题,大多数学生针对这个话题的专业用词,比如说“罪犯”“犯罪”这些词汇会重复的比较多 ,以下是犯罪类话题常用词汇补充:


  犯罪行为:criminal behaviors, wrongdoing, lawbreaking, delinquency


  罪犯:criminals  offenders  convicts outlaws suspect prisoner juvenile criminals  minor criminals 青少年罪犯


  juvenile delinquent / juvenile offender


  犯罪(动词)


  commit a crime (commit crimes) violate the law / break the law offend against the law


  暴力犯罪/非暴力犯罪  violent crimes / non-violent crimes


  犯罪行为/违法行为 delinquent behaviors / illegal acts / behavious


  青少年犯罪 juvenile delinquency


  illegality 名词,泛指所有违法行为


  wrongdoing / misconduct / delinquency 名词,都是指的是行为不端


  犯罪率的表达方式


  crime rate / incident of crime


  犯罪类话题常用的论据方向是题目中的事情对于以下四种人的好的坏的影响


  1. 对罪犯本身的影响


  2对受害者(the victims)的影响


  3.对普通人的影响--维护了社会稳定social stability


  4对潜在的犯罪者(potential criminals )的影响


  例如在这个题目中


  Some people think the media should stop reporting details of crimes to the public while others think such reports also have their advantages. Discuss both views and give your own opinicon.


  观点一的讨论方向是“应该禁止报道犯罪细节给大众”,按照上面的四个方向我们可以写出的至少三个方向。


  犯罪细节的报道对于受害者而言,是被迫再次经历噩梦;对于普通人而言是害怕相似的犯罪发生在自己身上,长期甚至会引起心理疾病;对于潜在的犯罪者而言,是给他提供了学习犯罪并改进的机会,会增加以后警察破案的难度,写出的段落如下:


  On the one hand, it is acknowledged that reports of criminal details,in most cases, carry great risks. The most striking factor is that they render many citizens afraid of crimes and worried about their own safety. Obviously, a great number of city residents will fear that the same crimes will happen to them, which can even contribute to serious psychological problems. Furthermore, media reports of criminal details are unfair for the victims of crimes. The victims who have suffered greatly from these crimes would feel they were forced to experience a nightmare again. Finally,potential criminals can learn from such reported details to avoid mistakes, which may add to the difficulty that the police have in capturing criminals. It is arguable that detailed media reports of crimes are a serious threat to social safety and there is a definite link between the widespread reports of crimes and the rise of the crime rate.


  再比如这道题


  Putting criminals into prisons is not so effective in dealing with them. Instead, education and job training should be offered to them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


  把犯罪者关进监狱的好处我们提供的四个方向都可以写


  1. 预防罪犯再犯罪,尤其是惯犯 prevent the criminals from re-commitment especially\in particular\particularly the habitual criminals罪犯在监狱的行为受到监控不会对外界造成伤害。


  2. 抚慰受害者solace\comfort the victims


  3. The criminals’ behaviors may be closely monitored and would not cause damage to the outside world. ---保护了普通人,维护了社会稳定social stability


  4. 有震慑作用,可以警示潜在的犯罪人the deterrent effects may warn the potential criminals from committing crimes.  deter the potential criminals所以这个题目我们写disagree会更有的写。


  当然犯罪类话题还有许多别的题目,但是大多数犯罪类题目基本都可以从这四个方向想出那么一个或者两个论点来展开。


  当然犯罪类话题还有许多别的论据方向,学生在日常学生中也要注意积累。

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